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melamine...

“Researchers in China have found out that china’s milk products and other food stuffs made from milk contains melamine” the newscaster said. I was watching the news when I realized that I have bought a carton of milk that morning from the supermarket. I shuffled to my kitchen quickly opened the refrigerator and checked the milk products. To my horror all the products were from china. I was speechless for a few seconds and was paralyzed with fear. I told my maid to remove all dairy products from china.
Then I went to call my friends and relatives to warn them about the incident, everyone was aware except for my sister. I related the whole incident to her when she told me that her three year old kid, Natasha drank a glass of milk the day before and has been complaining that the place where her kidney was was pain since today morning. She said that she would call me back after confirming. “Ring ring” the phone rang, after a few minutes. My sister told me that Natasha has drunk tainted milk from China. She was frightened and was on the brink of tears. She immediately brought her to tan Tock Seng and I went there too. Her daughter was admitted into the emergency room. When my sister saw me, tears welled up in her eyes and no words could express her agony. The shocked robbed him of speech. A few hours later the doctor came out of the room with beads of perspiration dripping down his forehead. “ I am….sorry….to tell that….your…daughter…has developed…kidney stones…the doctor stammered. When my sister heard that she broke out into tears and collapsed at that very moment. I sprinkled some water on her forehead and got up a few minutes later. Her eyes were puffy and red after all the crying. I told that everything will be alright and need not to worry. After consoling her we both went to the doctor’s room to get more information. The doctor said that Natasha’s kidney is damaged and need to be removed she is in a very critical condition and needed to find a donor as soon as possible. ‘I will ….I will’ my sister said sobbing. The doctor soon conducted an operation on Natasha and everything went successfully. After the operation Natasha woke up, my sister gave her hugs and kisses. “She is alive…she is alive!” my sister exclaimed as she rubbed her eye in disbelief. During that time my family members arrived to pay a visit. A few weeks later Natasha was discharged
On the next day “Singaporean girl affected be China’s tainted milk scandal but is safe’ the headlines spread all over the newspapers, I read it as tears rolled down my cheeks.

the broken wondow

It was a sultry afternoon, with the hot ball of fire burning in the cloudless sky. The intense heat was passing through me, and beads of perspiration trickled down my forehead. It was recess and I was doing duty in my classroom.
Before I knew it, hysteria ensued. Out of the blue, while I was cleaning the windows, the chairs I was standing on gave way. I applied a vice-like grip onto one of the windowpanes. The windowpanes broke, as it could not take my weight. I fell to the ground with a loud thud. The shattered windowpanes cut my hands. My throat contracted as panic flooded me like a wild fire. My instinct told me to run away, so I immediately sprinted down to assembly, keeping my hands in my pockets so no one could see them bleeding. When the whole class came up to the classroom for lessons, my teacher saw my classmates john and terry cleaning up the broken glass. Assuming the obvious, my teacher strode up to them. “Teacher we were just doing our duty,” said the two boys in unison. As they were notorious for destroying the school property, my teacher brought them to the principal’s office. On seeing their sorry plight, I ran after them and told my teacher that I was the one who broke the windowpane. Luckily she did not scold me.
Honesty does pay, doesn’t it?

tricked!

Whenever I look at the scar on my brother, Georgie’s forehead a deep sense of remorse pierced through my heart. This was what happened on that fateful day…..
Georgie, who is a sturdy boy, has an adorable face, which was well balanced with two deep dimples. Although he is a mischievous, he is well liked by many people but I think otherwise. I find him a pain in the neck and his presence is a nuisance to me. That day, even broke the robot elephant which I had to submit for a robotics competition. A strong desire for vengeance struck my mind. It’s high time for me to teach him a lesson. The next morning, I invited him to go for cycling at the park near our house. He was elated to hear this and he was unaware that the brake on his cycle had been tempered by me the last night while he was sleeping like a dog. When we reached the park, I challenged him to a race and he agreed without any hesitation. I was overjoyed that he fell or my trick. “Catch me if you can, you slow tortoise!” shouted Georgie who was in the lead shortly after the race started. Georgie’s happiness did not last when he came to a slope. As he was riding down the slope, he tried to slow but realized that the brake was not working. He looked so horrified that I burst out laughing, “Hah, you fell for my trick!” In a split second, his bike collided into a tree. He was flung one meter away and landed on a pavement with serious head injuries. When I rushed to him, he muttered, “I will tell mum….”before he passed out.
He was rushed to the hospital and had three stitches on his forehead to close up the wound. I was severely reprimanded by my parents and I was banned from favorite television show for one week.

kidnapped

It was a serene afternoon, with a clear blue sky dotted with fluffy white clouds. I was walking home, whistling happily when a car pulled up beside me. “Good afternoon, my boy!” the driver greeted me politely while a young man got down the car. “Harry now!” the driver yelled. The youngster responded as fast as lightning and cupped his hand over my mouth. I inhaled a smell, one that sinks and smelled poisonous. Darkness enveloped me…….
When I regained consciousness, I found myself lying in a gloomy and musty hut. Harry was saying to the driver, “Mr. Goon, can I have it now?” Sure…..” Mr. Goon replied. He retrieved a roll of fifty dollar notes and handed it to harry. He left in a hurry. “Well, I expect you know who I am.” Mr. Goon said to me. I was about to say no when I realized I was Gagged and tied to a chair. I shook my head vigorously. “No, I will tell you. I used to work in your father’s company but was fired when he caught me doing nothing. I had not earned enough to return to America.” I then realized that he was the American born Chinese my father fired a few months ago. He took out his hand phone and dialed a number. “Mr. Lim?” he addressed my father and continued, “I have your son here! I want a ransom of 10 million dollars in exchange for your son. Meet me an hour later at Macritchie Reservoir. You know what would happen if you call the police, I expect?” he hung up and then boomed, “come with me!” he brought me to a car and drove me there. When we reached the place, I saw my dad standing behind a tree. “Dad” I exclaimed and got down the car, throwing myself onto my father, with tears rolling down my cheeks. “Now where is my money?” Mr. Goon said. ‘bang’ a bullet shot by a hidden policeman, hit his chest and he collapsed onto the floor, with blood spurting out of his wound
Mr. Goon was dead! Harry was also caught and sentenced to jail. My father drove me home, consoling me. This was a frightening and unforgettable experience in my life.

today is the happiest day of my life becuz someone has forgotten about me which i was waiting for very long

composition about pele

In 1940 August 23^rd, Pele was born In a poor family in a state in Brazil called Tres coracoes . His father was a great soccer player. Pele’s father stopped playing soccer because he injured his knee while playing a soccer match. His family moved to Baura when he was four years old.

In the state where Pele lived there was no soccer ball, so Pele and his friends would normally squeeze newspapers to form a ball and played with it. They would all play soccer from morning to night without studying at all. Pele’s father would teach him soccer skills before a soccer match so that he win the game easily. When Pele was not playing soccer he would polish other people‘s shoe just to support his family.

Pele played soccer very well and managed to get into Bauru soccer team. He played in the junior team and won the title for the team. Next another soccer team called Santos called him to join the team and he did so. In his first year, Pele scored 17 goals which was a great achievement. Pele played in Santos until 1958 when he joined the Brazil national team.

Brazil played with Sweden and won the game; they scored 5-2 and were recorded in the Guinness Book of records. The victory was all thanks to Pele. He won the Guinness records when he was only 17 years old.

Pele was able to understand the game, so he could dribble past through two defenders , head the ball into the net, can stop the ball by his chest, and can score a goal without failure.

In 1970 Brazil went to Mexico to play in the Guinness records again. This time they played against Italy and thrashed them 4-1 and came in the Guinness world of records thrice in a row. The spectators were unbelievable when Pele headed the ball into the net. When the team won the Guinness records, the next day in the Sunday times the headlines was “How do you spell Pele? G-O-D “

A few years later, when Pele retired, 761 news reporters from 25 countries visited him and they found out that Pele scored 1282 goals in his 22 years of playing soccer.

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